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First, I want them to understand me.
Second, I want to hear ¡°It¡¯s okay.¡±
Third, I want to talk with them.

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Hello Jamie,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



How would you like to be comforted by your parents? Explain.


First, I want them to understand me.
>>> CORRECT

Second, I want to hear ¡°It¡¯s okay.¡±
>>> Second, I want to hear the words: ¡°It¡¯s okay¡± from them.

Third, I want to talk with them.
>>> CORRECT
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