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Q:What country would you never visit?
A:l\'II never visit Africa.
First, Africa\'s day\'s temperature and night\'s temperature is very different.
Second, there are many dangerous animals and plants.
Last, there are not many foods, so we\'II be starving.

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Hello Paul! You did great with your first homework this week! 

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


l\'II never visit Africa.
>>I'll never visit Africa.

First, Africa\'s day\'s temperature and night\'s temperature is very different.
>>First, Africa's days' temperature and nights' temperature are very different.

Second, there are many dangerous animals and plants.
>>CORRECT

Last, there are not many foods, so we\'II be starving.
>>Last, there isn't much food so we'll be starving.
OR>>Last, there isn't a lot of food so we will starve.
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