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Recently, When my husebend drove to restaurant, he paid a fine,beacuse of overspeed.
So The fine was 750dallor.It's so terrible. Since then,I've been keeping the speed when we driving.

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Recently, When my husebend drove to restaurant, he paid a fine,beacuse of overspeed.
>> Recently, when my husband drove to the restaurant, he paid a fine because of overspeeding. 

So The fine was 750dallor.
>> The fine was 750 dollars. 

It's so terrible. 
>> CORRECT

Since then,I've been keeping the speed when we driving.
>> Since the, I kept reminding him to not overspeed when driving. 
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