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The meanings of the celebrating holidays

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2021-02-10 609

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I hope to eat a lot of food and take a rest a lot on holidays.
Also I want to gain weight by eating a lot, especially the part of my face and cheek.
For me, the meanings of celebrating holidays is to be able to share something with my family and to be with them.
This is why it is important for me.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I hope you enjoy this holiday.
You have worked so hard.
You deserve to celebrate.
Let's talk next week.
Have fun!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I hope to eat a lot of food and take a rest a lot on holidays.
>> I always hope to eat a lot of food and take a lot of rest on holidays.
Also I want to gain weight by eating a lot, especially the part of my face and cheek.
>> I also want to gain weight by eating a lot, especially on the part of my face and cheeks.
For me, the meanings of celebrating holidays is to be able to share something with my family and to be with them.
>> For me, the meaning of celebrating holidays is to be able to share something with my family and to be with them.
This is why it is important for me.
>> Correct
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