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How will you compare teamwork success with individual success?
I will compare teamwork success with individual success for looking process of the work. It is both important to plan and carry out the work. While cooperating is more important in teamwork, keeping constant is more important in individual work. Also, I will compare creativity and level of completion too. Teamwork should maintain consistency and individual work should have diverse ideas. For these factors, I will compare teamwork success with individual success.

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Hello, Libby!

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~Teacher Gina


I will compare teamwork success with individual success for looking process of the work. 
>> I will compare teamwork success with individual success by looking at the process of the work.
It is both important to plan and carry out the work.
>> CORRECT.
While cooperating is more important in teamwork, keeping constant is more important in individual work.
>> While cooperating is more important in teamwork, being constant is more important in individual work.
Also, I will compare creativity and level of completion too.
>> CORRECT.
Teamwork should maintain consistency and individual work should have diverse ideas.
>> CORRECT.
For these factors, I will compare teamwork success with individual success.
>> CORRECT.
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