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Do you agree that tattoo is modern art?

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My opinion is that tattoo is modern art, because tattoo is a expression way of drawer's mind or clients. Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoo on website, The tattoos were drawn on a wound. The tattoo covered the wound, so the wound becomes base sketch of tattoo.I am sure that tattoo touched some's heart, and I am also touched. When I see the tattoo. There is no doubt that tattoo is modern art.

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Do you agree that tattoo is modern art?

My opinion is that tattoo is modern art, because tattoo is a expression way of drawer's mind or clients. >>> My opinion is a tattoo a modern art, yes because a tattoo is an expression of a drawer's mind or the clients. 

Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoo on website, The tattoos were drawn on a wound. 
>>> Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoos on the website like this tattoo which was drawn on a scar. 

The tattoo covered the wound, so the wound becomes base sketch of tattoo. 
>>> The tattoo actually covered the wound, so the wound becomes the base sketch of the tattoo. 

I am sure that tattoo touched some's heart, and I am also touched. When I see the tattoo. 
>>> I am sure that this tattoo touched someone's heart, and I am also touched when I see the tattoo. 

There is no doubt that tattoo is modern art.
>>> CORRECT


* I agree, the tattoo made the scar so artistic and nothing to be ashamed off. ^^
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