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Prove that digital device is better than papers or notebooks. Write it in a paragraph form.
I think writting the letter on paper is so hard...
So degital device is better than paper..
Also we have to have eraser and pens to writ..
But degital device is not needs anything to type!!^^

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Hi Jenny, I totally got your point. But many peple still prefer the old style. Enjoy what makes you happy :)

Teacher Aki ^^
I think writting the letter on paper is so hard...

>> I think, writing a letter on a paper is hard.

OR:  I think it's hard to write a letter in a paper.
 So degital device is better than paper..

>> For me, a digital device is better than a paper.
 Also we have to have eraser and pens to writ..

>> Also, we need to have a pen and an eraser to be able to write.
 But degital device is not needs anything to type!!^^

>> But a digital device needs only to type.

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