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Hello Ruby!
I hope I can visit your house one day, so you can read me some of your books and we can play with your younger sister. ^ ^
-Rachel
I think it will be good.
>> correct
becuse you can envite someone to your house and play and talk with them.
>> Because you can invite someone to your house to play and talk with him or her. 
and we can meet or go over and play with someone.
>> Or we can meet and sleep over to play with that person.
and of corse you can play with someone to
>> And of course you can play with someone too. 
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