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Q.Do you find it easy to trust others? Why is that?

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These days, Familys don't trust each other.

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Hello Sir Tony. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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It is not easy to trust others. 
Because of we never know about each other.
>>> It is not easy to trust others because we know nothing about each other. 
These days, Familys don't trust each other.
>>> These days, families don't even trust each other.  
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