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If I want to do half-day but my boss didn't approve, I will work fast as I can do, and work more harder.
Than my boss will think about it.

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Hello Jamie,

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If you really want to do a half-day because you need to do something important but your boss didn't allow you, what will you do?

If I want to do half-day but my boss didn't approve, I will work fast as I can do, and work more harder.
>>> If I want to do half-day but my boss didn't approve then I will work as fast as I can and I'll work more harder.

Than my boss will think about it.
>>> Then my boss can think about it and reconsider my situation. 
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