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(HW) Things can go wrong when you travel. Have you had any bad travel experiences?

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During my trip to Boracay, my friends and I planned and reserved hopping tour program.
In the morning, we went out to the place we were supposed to be. But there was nothing and no one to pick us up.
When my friend called the person in charge, we find out that we knew the wrong place.
So we took tricycle to go to right place(White Beach) but we missed the time.
Fortunately, we can find and take our boat because the boat wait for us!

It was not bad travel experience but now that we think about it, it's a nervous and shaky memory because our first schedule was at stake.

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Hello Gloria, 
It's good you were able to catch up with the boat! It would have been a disaster if you paid for everything but you were left behind. Thank you for sharing this story:)
-Rachel 
During my trip to Boracay, my friends and I planned and reserved hopping tour program.
>> correct
>> OR: During my Boracay trip, my friends and I planned and reserved an island hopping tour. 
In the morning, we went out to the place we were supposed to be. 
 But there was nothing and no one to pick us up.
>> In the morning, we went to the place where we were supposed to be, but no one was there to pick us up. 
When my friend called the person in charge, we find out that we knew the wrong place. 
>> When my friend called the person in-charge, we found out that we were at the wrong place. 
So we took tricycle to go to right place(White Beach) but we missed the time.
>> correct
Fortunately, we can find and take our boat because the boat wait for us!
>> Fortunately, we eventually found our boat because it waited for us. 
It was not bad travel experience but now that we think about it, it's a nervous and shaky memory because our first schedule was at stake.
>> It was not a bad travel experience, but now that we think about it, it was a nerve-racking moment because our first schedule was at stake. 
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