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1. How do Korean teachers punish tardy students?

When I was in the 5th grade, punishment of teacher was stand in the back in classroom for 10 minutes.

2. Share your experience of being late in class. How did your teacher handle the situation?

I was late on November 3rd, 2020 because of allergies. But because of my teacher heard that story, she didn't give any penalty to me.

3. What do you think is the importance of punctuality?

I think it is important because being late could make other people worried and angry.

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Hello Geonha! You did great with your homework tonight!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila



When I was in the 5th grade, punishment of teacher was stand in the back in classroom for 10 minutes.
>>When I was in the fifth grade, the punishment given by the teacher was to stand at the back of the classroom for 10 minutes.

I was late on November 3rd, 2020 because of allergies. 
>>CORRECT

But because of my teacher heard that story, she didn't give any penalty to me.
>>But because my teacher heard that story, she didn't give me any penalty.

I think it is important because being late could make other people worried and angry.
>>CORRECT
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