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When individuals use what they have learned through education to be useful to society can society develop.
It also need to help individuals achieve what they want through education.
These two have to be in harmony.
It is because individual achievement is necessary to help the develop.
Therefore, they need to provide education where these tow can be harmonized.

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Hi there Eden! ^^ Thanks you for diligently doing your homework! Keep improving! Stay safe!
 >>> TEACHER GEMMA
When individuals use what they have learned through education to be useful to society can society develop.
>>> When individuals use the education they have learned, it will be useful to develop society.
It also need to help individuals achieve what they want through education.
>>> CORRECT
These two have to be in harmony.
>>> CORRECT
It is because individual achievement is necessary to help the develop.
>>> It is because individuals' achievement is necessary to help in society's development.
Therefore, they need to provide education where these tow can be harmonized.
>>> Therefore, they need to provide these education where these two can be harmonized.
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