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Jane`s titan robot

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2021-02-17 1013

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Yesterday the jane`s titan robot was came home.I was so excited but, jane`s titan robot came at night. So I have to wait.
Today I start at morning, it was so awesome.There was a blade,something like power saw,big leg,boost and many thing cool.
I played that,it was very fun.And there`s a 10th anniversary figure, the goid ninja. But thats not in the storie just a 10th anniversary souvenir.Jane`s titan robot is great.

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Hello Seung Ju! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your night! :)

~ T. Tricia


Yesterday the jane`s titan robot was came home.
>> Yesterday, Zane's titan robot was delivered to my house.

I was so excited but, jane`s titan robot came at night. 
>> I was so excited but I received it at night.

So I have to wait.
>> So I had to wait.

Today I start at morning, it was so awesome.
>> Today, I assembled it in the morning and it is so awesome.

There was a blade,something like power saw,big leg,boost and many thing cool.
>> It has a sword, a power saw, huge legs and a lot of cool things are included with it.

I played that,it was very fun.
>> I played all of them and it was very fun.

And there`s a 10th anniversary figure, the goid ninja.
>> And it also includes a 10th-anniversary figure, the gold ninja.

But thats not in the storie just a 10th anniversary souvenir.
>> But that gold ninja is not in the story, it's just a 10th-anniversary souvenir.

Jane`s titan robot is great.
>> Zane's titan robot is so amazing!
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