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The older they get, the weaker they get.
Also they bones are weak, and older people get tired quickly.
Most people want to exercise, but they can't because they body don't follow.
But It would be better to increase the amount of exercise and time a day little by little.
Also, if they exercise hard, there is a risk of injury.
I think walking exercise would be good.
If they do exercise, they can healthy.

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The older they get, the weaker they get.
>>> The older they get, the weaker they become.
Also they bones are weak, and older people get tired quickly.
>>> Also, their bones get weak, and older people get tired quickly.
Most people want to exercise, but they can't because they body don't follow.
>>> Most people want to exercise, but they can't because their body doesn't want to.
But it would be better to increase the amount of exercise and time a day little by little.
>>> CORRECT
Also, if they exercise hard, there is a risk of injury.
>>> Also, if they exercise hard, there is a risk of being injured.
I think walking exercise would be good.
>>> OR i think walking exercise would the best. 
If they do exercise, they can healthy.
>>> If they exercise, they could be healthy.
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