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The best gift to our parents is letter.

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2021-02-19 1071

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I can say: The letter can give brave to me, also to you.
I have a experience about letter. Not about me, about my friend. I can't remember what is my friends name, because I was a 3rd grade that time. My friend was my best friend, so I can know about my friend's all about favorite things. My best friend's favorite friut is blueberry, favorite food is tteokbokki, and favorite color is skyblue. Recently, my best friend was said: "I want to write a letter to my favorite friend.", so I said to my best friend: "I recommend writing a letter". My best friend gave a letter to she's favorite friend. And then, she said: "As you said, writing a letter made it easier to deliver what I wanted to say. Thank you." I feel proud of me, so I think the best gift to our parents is letter. It makes me easier to say "I love you, mom. Also, I love you,dad".

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there Maria!

A letter is a very sweet gesture to draft and make your parents understand how you feel. Did you make them one lately? When are you going to make one?

It doesn't have to be Parent's Day. It has to be when they did something for you that you do it.

Thanks for this very interesting composition!

See you next week.

-T. Donna =)

I can say: The letter can give brave to me, also to you.
>> I can say that giving letter can make me brave and also with you.

I have a experience about letter. Not about me, about my friend. I can't remember what is my friends name, because I was a 3rd grade that time. 
>> I have an experience about a letter. It's not about me, it's about my friend. I can't remember what is my friend's name because I was a 3rd grader that time. 

My friend was my best friend, so I can know about my friend's all about favorite things. 
>> My friend was my best friend, so I can know about her favorite things. 

My best friend's favorite friut is blueberry, favorite food is tteokbokki, and favorite color is skyblue. 
>> My best friend's favorite fruit is blueberry, favorite food is tteokbokki, and favorite color is sky blue. 

Recently, my best friend was said: "I want to write a letter to my favorite friend.", so I said to my best friend: "I recommend writing a letter". 
>> Recently, my best friend said: "I want to write a letter to my favorite friend.", so I said to my best friend: "I recommend writing a letter". 

My best friend gave a letter to she's favorite friend. And then, she said: "As you said, writing a letter made it easier to deliver what I wanted to say. 
>> My best friend gave a letter to her favorite friend. And then, she said: "As you said, writing a letter made it easier to deliver what I wanted to say. 

Thank you." I feel proud of me, so I think the best gift to our parents is letter. It makes me easier to say "I love you, mom. Also, I love you,dad".
>> Thank you." I feel proud of you. So I think the best gift to our parents is a letter. It makes it easier to say "I love you, Mom. Also, I love you, Dad".
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