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2021-02-19 1461

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I read the question Gina gave me for homework, but right now I am very sleeeeeepy to answer so I like to answer other questions next time(But I can't assure you)

I feel every time Gina or I says ohh it's time, the time was very short for these two women.

So you know what? I decided to have two classes(6:00 p.m to 6:50 nonestop) with Gina. I applied for the other class already(6:25~6:50 pm). I don't know if I can handle this for many months because of my schedule, but for now it is okay for me. So I hope it is okay for Gina too.

Thanks for sharing beautiful ideas and thoughts with me always as a teacher and friend.

Sincerely, Eunyoung(Eunice)

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Hi, Eun Young!

Good evening!
Thank you for sending me a message and don't worry about the homework, it's okay. ^^

I was surprised when I saw the additional class on my schedule but I'm really happy about it because we'll have a longer time to talk to each other. I also feel the same way when you mentioned that the time feels so short when we have to end the class or whenever I see the time. Now, I'm glad that it's longer.

It's really fun talking to you as we share our thoughts and ideas about the topics that comes to mind. Again, I'm so much thankful and happy. ^^


See you again on Monday! Enjoy the weekend and always take care! ^^

~Teacher Gina


I read the question Gina gave me for homework, but right now I am very sleeeeeepy to answer so I like to answer other questions next time(But I can't assure you)
>> I read the question Gina gave me for homework, but right now I am very sleepy to answer so I like to answer the other questions next time. (But I can't assure you)

I feel every time Gina or I says ohh it's time, the time was very short for these two women.
>> CORRECT.

So you know what? I decided to have two classes(6:00 p.m to 6:50 nonestop) with Gina.
>> So you know what? I decided to have two classes(6:00 p.m to 6:50 nonstop) with Gina.

I applied for the other class already(6:25~6:50 pm). I don't know if I can handle this for many months because of my schedule, but for now it is okay for me. So I hope it is okay for Gina too.
>> CORRECT.

Thanks for sharing beautiful ideas and thoughts with me always as a teacher and friend.
>>  Thanks for sharing beautiful ideas and thoughts with me always as a teacher and a friend.

Sincerely, Eunyoung(Eunice)
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