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What are the advantages/disadvantages of taking risks?

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Have you heard about the sentence "High risk High return"?
that's it. if you can take risk higher, you can advantage more about something.
but you can lose more at the sametime. for example if you invest a lot of money for bitcoin, you can earn the money. but you can also lose the money. so when you consider investing something, just invest money which is no risk.

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Have you heard about the sentence "High risk High return"?
>> Have you heard about the phrase " High risk, high return?"

that's it. if you can take risk higher, you can advantage more about something.
>> That's it. If you can take a higher risk, you can benefit more from it. 

but you can lose more at the sametime. for example if you invest a lot of money for bitcoin, you can earn the money. but you can also lose the money. 
>> At the same time you can loose more. For example, the time that I invested a lot of money on bitcoin. You can earn a lot of money but also loose a lot of it. 

so when you consider investing
>> So you should consider a lot of things when you invest. 

 something, just invest money which is no risk.
>> So you should just invest some money without risk. 
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