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ThesedYs, people don't have to enpugh time to physical exercise. Because they are busy.
Also, subway station and bus station are very near from their house, so they don't have to walking for a long time.
Almost people to drive in order to go to near destination.
So they don't need to physical exercise.
But if they want to be healthy, they have to physical exercise.

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Good morning EDEN~ Grateful Monday to the both of us! I hope that you had a refreshing weekend. Anyway, it's a new week and let's get the most out of it! Thanks for doing your homework! You must have been practicing. Superb!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
ThesedYs, people don't have to enpugh time to physical exercise. Because they are busy.
>>> These days, people don't have enough time to exercise.
Because they are busy.
>>> CORRECT
Also, subway station and bus station are very near from their house, so they don't have to walking for a long time.
>>> Also, subway station and bus station are very near from their house, so they don't have to walk for a long time.
Almost people to drive in order to go to near destination.
>>> Most people drive in order to go to their destinations.
So they don't need to physical exercise.
>>> So, they don't have the chance to exercise.
But if they want to be healthy, they have to physical exercise.
>>> But if they want to be healthy, they have to exercise.
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