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Q. What are the major holidays in your country?

A. The major holidays on my country are first one is "Seollal" means Korean New Year's Day, second one is "Chuseok" means Korean Thanksgiving Day. Besides, The children's Day, The parent's Day and the last one is the Day of Buddha's Coming.

Among this, the most important days are "Seollal" and " Chuseok"

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Thank you for this Sir Tony.

The major holidays on my country are first one is "Seollal" means Korean New Year's Day, second one is "Chuseok" means Korean Thanksgiving Day. 
>>> The major holidays in my country are "Seollal" which means Korean New Year's Day and the second one is "Chuseok" which means Korean Thanksgiving Day.   
Besides, The children's Day, The parent's Day and the last one is the Day of Buddha's Coming.
>>> Besides these, we also have the Children's Day, the Parent's Day and the last one is the Day of Buddha's Coming.  
Among this, the most important days are "Seollal" and " Chuseok"
>>>  Among these, the most important days are "Seollal" and " Chuseok".
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