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What¡¯s the most interesting thing you can do in your house if you¡¯re stuck at home for the weekend?

The most interesting thing at home is watching Netflix. These days, I started watching Japan animation and it is really fun. So my most interesting hobby became watching animation while eating delicious foods! It makes me happy and blows away all of stress.

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Hello, Michelle! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your the night! :)

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The most interesting thing at home is watching Netflix. 
>> CORRECT!

These days, I started watching Japan animation and it is really fun.
>> These days, I started watching Japanese animation and it is really fun.

So my most interesting hobby became watching animation while eating delicious foods!
>> CORRECT!

It makes me happy and blows away all of stress.
>> It makes me happy and blows away all of the stress.
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