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What part of your childhood would you remember the most?

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I remember my middle school days the most. Because middle school was the most fun and I spent it with my friends.
My friends and I were all living together in the neighborhood near the school. So we could get closer easily and enjoy activities together.
Currently, the friends immigrated to other countries or moved to different regions, and we cannot meet easily because they do their own jobs. So I remember my middle school days longer and sometimes.

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Hi Sarah! Awww, I envy you. I wish I could've lived with my friends too when I was in middle school. Anyways, thank you for sharing your experience. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

-Teacher Elise 

I remember my middle school days the most. 
>> CORRECT

Because middle school was the most fun and I spent it with my friends.
>>It's because middle school was the most fun and I spent it with my friends.

My friends and I were all living together in the neighborhood near the school. 
>>CORRECT

So we could get closer easily and enjoy activities together.
>>CORRECT

Currently, the friends immigrated to other countries or moved to different regions, and we cannot meet easily because they do their own jobs. 
>>Currently, my friends immigrated to other countries or moved to different regions and we cannot meet easily because they have their own jobs. 

So I remember my middle school days longer and sometimes.
>> So the part of my childhood days that I will remember the most is when I was still in middle school.
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