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Have you ever disobeyed the law before?

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2021-02-24 1654

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I have tried to obey the law as possible as I can for entire life.
But sometimes I have disobeyed the law such as jaywalking and speed violation so on...
There are many rules which we can't even realize doing wrong in our society. Also It depend on the different countries, the rules can be different. We need to search about the information of the rules which we encounter every day or supposed to experience in unfamiliar place. Because when we disobey a tiny thing, it can cause the result seriously.
I don't want to involve in difficult situation or paying unexpected fine.
Therefore I should be cautious about the laws all the time.

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Hi Young Won!

Perhaps, all of us have disobeyed the law in one way or another just as how we did not listen to our parents. I jay walk too when carrying heavy loads. I feel sorry about it though.

Anyway, there is a continuous effort to follow rules and stay away from serious trouble like being behind the bars for being silly sometimes.

Thank you for contemplating on this answer. It is a very well made one.

See you in class!

-T. Donna =)

I have tried to obey the law as possible as I can for entire life.
>> I have tried to obey the law as possible as I can for my entire life.

But sometimes I have disobeyed the law such as jaywalking and speed violation so on...
>> But sometimes I have disobeyed the law such as jaywalking, speed violation, and so on...

There are many rules which we can't even realize doing wrong in our society. 
>> There are many rules which we can't even realize we are doing wrong in our society. 

Also It depend on the different countries, the rules can be different. 
>> Also, it depends on different countries, the rules can be different. 
Or: Also, rules can be different in every country.

We need to search about the information of the rules which we encounter every day or supposed to experience in unfamiliar place. 
>> We need to search about the information of the rules which we encounter every day or supposed to experience in an unfamiliar place. 

Because when we disobey a tiny thing, it can cause the result seriously.
>> Because when we disobey a tiny thing, it can result to serious matters.

I don't want to involve in difficult situation or paying unexpected fine.
>> I don't want to be involved in difficult situations or pay unexpected fines.

Therefore I should be cautious about the laws all the time.
>> Correct!
Or: Therefore I should be cautious about the law all the time.
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