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To tell the conclusion, I think that life imprisonment is better than the death penalty. Because, life imprisonment also can keep living, although I don't have freedom. And, I am afraid of death. To adopt the death penalty is difficult. If I stay in a prison for a long time, I will be crazy. At that time, I can adopt the death penalty. Sure, If I committed a crime as bad as getting death penalty, I would commit suicide. But, I am sure, I am not a bad guy as much as getting death penalty. So, I must survive to prove my innocence.

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To tell the conclusion, I think that life imprisonment is better than the death penalty.
>>> In my own conclusion, I think life imprisonment is better than the death penalty.

Because, life imprisonment also can keep living, although I don't have freedom.
>>> Life imprisonment means they can still keep on living, although they don't have freedom.

And, I am afraid of death. To adopt the death penalty is difficult. 
>>> Personally, I am afraid of death. To be punished with the death penalty is difficult. 

If I stay in a prison for a long time, I will be crazy. 
>>> CORRECT 

At that time, I can adopt the death penalty. 
>>> At that time, I can adapt and accept the death penalty. 

Sure, If I committed a crime as bad as getting death penalty, I would commit suicide.
>>> If I committed a crime as bad as being punished with the death penalty, I would commit suicide instead.

But, I am sure, I am not a bad guy as much as getting death penalty. 
>>> But, I am sure, I am not a bad guy to be punished with the death penalty. 

So, I must survive to prove my innocence.
>>> So, I must survive to prove my innocence if I didn't commit the crime.
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