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Q:What is the importance of flossing?
A:The importance of flossing is flossing keep our teeth clean and healthy.
First, if our teeth are not clean then our smile will be not good,
Second, if we don't have healthy teeth, our teeth will be rot so we can't eat some foods.
Last, if we don't have healthy teeth, we will feel pain from them, so flossing is important.

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Hello Paul! Nice job!

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~Teacher Sheila



The importance of flossing is flossing keep our teeth clean and healthy.
>>The importance of flossing is it keeps our teeth clean and healthy.

First, if our teeth are not clean then our smile will be not good,
>>First, if our teeth are not clean then our smile will not be good.

Second, if we don't have healthy teeth, our teeth will be rot so we can't eat some foods.
>>Second, if we don't have healthy teeth, our teeth will be rotten so can't eat some food.

Last, if we don't have healthy teeth, we will feel pain from them, so flossing is important.
>>CORRECT
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