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The way of reducing waste materials

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2021-02-24 1306

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In my perspective, lessening waste materials is not difficult to do.
That is, when we use some materials and don't use this for a moment, we can save this.
For example, when I take a shower, I don't always use water at the time, such as using shampoo. So, I can take off the water at the time.
And I think this small thing changes world's water supply.

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Hello Sunny!

There are so many little ways we can save the planet but so many people do not bother to do them.

We hope that they won't wait until there is no more resource left.

Thanks for this composition, well said and done!

-T. Donna =)

In my perspective, lessening waste materials is not difficult to do.
>> Correct!

That is, when we use some materials and don't use this for a moment, we can save this.
>> That is, when we use some materials and don't use these for a moment, we can save this.

For example, when I take a shower, I don't always use water at the time, such as using shampoo. So, I can take off the water at the time.
>> For example, when I take a shower, I don't always use water at that time, such as using shampoo. So, I can turn off the water at that time.

And I think this small thing changes world's water supply.
>> Correct!
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