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What food makes you feel at home and why is it special?

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I think it is kimchi soup. because kimchi soup made by mom is one of the best food in my life. when i feel bad or want to not eat anything, this food makes me better. do you have the special food at your home?

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Hi Tobby! Wow! That sounds delicious. I wish I could also have a taste of your mom's  kimchi. And yes, we also have special food here in the Philippines. My personal favorite is "Sinigang". I think there's a similar dish in Korea. It's usually sour and very soothing especially on a rainy day. You should try it too!  Anyways, thank you for sharing. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

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I think it is kimchi soup. because kimchi soup made by mom is one of the best food in my life. 
>> I think it is Kimchi soup. My mom usually makes it and it is one of my favorites. 

when i feel bad or want to not eat anything, this food makes me better. 
>> When I don't feel well or don't want to eat anything, this food makes me feel better. 

do you have the special food at your home?
>> Do you have any special food at your home?
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