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Will you keep up with the current events?

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I think that it's different from event to event.
We have to keep up with the current events that we feel to be worthwhile.
But if not worthwhile, it doesn't matter to me.
For example, it is very important for me to learn and accept things related to education.
But anything related to appearance, lifestyle, fashion, etc. doesn't need to catch up with current events.

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Hey, Eun Ha. Great job on your homework. I guess it also depends on what we are interested in as long as it is worthwhile. Thank you once again, appreciate it. Have a good one. ~Teacher Jane c",)


I think that it's different from event to event.
>> I think that it differs from event to event.

We have to keep up with the current events that we feel to be worthwhile.
>> CORRECT =)

But if not worthwhile, it doesn't matter to me.
>> CORRECT =)

For example, it is very important for me to learn and accept things related to education.
>> CORRECT =)

But anything related to appearance, lifestyle, fashion, etc. doesn't need to catch up with current events.
>> CORRECT =)

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