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Is having a convenience store near your house good? Why?

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The small towns of Korea are opend street market every five days
It sell many various goods
The foods, The clothes, The fish and The fruits

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Hi, Hae Lyeong!

Good evening and thank you for submitting your answer.
Having an open street market in your place is so awesome.
I think, it's the perfect place to buy stuff we need. ^^

By the way, with the question I sent, it was not completely answered since I asked about the convenience store- if it is good having one near your place.
Let's say, there's no convenience store and you have an open street market near you, you could have answered it this way.

There is no convenience store near my house but there is an open street market every five days.
And I like it. They sell many various goods like food, clothes, fish and fruits.


There you go. ^^ 
Have a good night and see you tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Gina

The small towns of Korea are opend street market every five days
>> The small towns of Korea have an open street market every five days.
It sell many various goods
>> It sells many various goods.
The foods, The clothes, The fish and The fruits
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