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Do you think aliens exist? Why?

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I think aliens exist. It\'s because the universe is amazingly wide, and like people, something or someone probably exist in other planet.
I have some story about aliens !!
My dad also believes the existence of aliens, and one day I asked him that do you know the meteorite avoided the orbit around the earth? the reason why I asked this was that if the meteorite had entered the orbit around the earth, there would have been a great disaster. Then my dad\'s answer was that the reason meteorite avoided the orbit was aliens had shot something and made the meteorite avoid away not to enter the orbit around the earth. Though I believe the existence of aliens, I laughed loudly when I heard the answer of him.

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Hi there Alice!
Thank you for your wonderful answer!
Have a nice day!
By the way, I also believe in them!

 



I think aliens exist.
>>CORRECT

 It's because the universe is amazingly wide, and like people, something or someone probably exist in other planet.
>> It's because the universe is amazingly wide, and like people, something or someone probably exists in other planets.

I have some story about aliens !!
>>I have a story about aliens!

My dad also believes the existence of aliens, and one day I asked him that do you know the meteorite avoided the orbit around the earth? 
>>My dad also believes in the existence of aliens and one day I asked him "do you know about the meteorite that avoided the orbit around the Earth? "

the reason why I asked this was that if the meteorite had entered the orbit around the earth, there would have been a great disaster. 
>>The reason why I asked this was because if the meteorite had entered the orbit of the Earth, there would have been a great disaster. 

Then my dad\'s answer was that the reason meteorite avoided the orbit was aliens had shot something and made the meteorite avoid away not to enter the orbit around the earth.
>>Then my dad's answer was that the reason the meteorite avoided the orbit was that aliens had shot something and made the meteorite avoid the path of the orbit.

 Though I believe the existence of aliens, I laughed loudly when I heard the answer of him.
>>Though I believe in the existence of aliens, I laughed loudly when I heard his answer. 

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