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If you could meet any famous person, dead or alive, who would it be and why?
-> If I could meet any famous person, dead or alive, I want to meet Einstein.
First, if I could meet Einstein, I can be very good at science such as physics, and quantum mechanics.
Second, if I could meet Einstein, I can discover secrets in this universe.
That's why I want to meet Einstein if I could meet any famous person, dead or alive.

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Hi John! That sounds fascinating. You can get the chance to know a lot of things that most people don't know about. Anyways, thank you for sharing. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

-Teacher Elise 

 If I could meet any famous person, dead or alive, I want to meet Einstein.
>>CORRECT

First, if I could meet Einstein, I can be very good at science such as physics, and quantum mechanics.
>>  If I could meet Einstein, I can ask for tips so that I can be very good at different aspects of science such as physics and quantum mechanics.

Second, if I could meet Einstein, I can discover secrets in this universe.
>> If I could meet him, I can also discover secrets in this universe.

That's why I want to meet Einstein if I could meet any famous person, dead or alive.
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