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advantage of the online class is to be economy of time

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Hi, Hae Lyeong!

Thank you once again for submitting your answer. ^^
By the way, since the question is asking about what you would like to learn, then maybe you could have added that after saying the advantage of an online class. 

For example:
The advantage of an online class is that it has the economy of time so I want to learn or study more about English.

~Teacher Gina


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