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If you could meet any famous person, dead or alive, who would it be and why?

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I want to meet Son, soccer starplayer. In detail, I want to meet Son in Tottenham Hostpur Stadium,U.K and I play with him just 10 minutes. Because he is motivation of my life. I know He put in the effort to play soccer well. I respect him and I am always supporting for him.

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Hi Tobby! I wish you could meet him too someday. It might be one of the best matches ever hahaha! Anyways, thank you for sharing. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

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I want to meet Son, soccer starplayer. 
>> I want to meet Son, the soccer star player. 

In detail, I want to meet Son in Tottenham Hostpur Stadium,U.K and I play with him just 10 minutes. 
>>In detail, I want to meet him in Tottenham Hotspur Stadium, U.K and play with him even just for 10 minutes.

Because he is motivation of my life. 
>> He is one of my motivations in life. 

I know He put in the effort to play soccer well. 
>> I know he puts a lot of effort in playing soccer. 

I respect him and I am always supporting for him.
>> I respect him and I always support him. 
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