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I remember living in Singapore for 2 months because of language training. I went with my juniors from the same school, and it was a program that offered language training and tourism at Singapore University with college students from other schools. It was my first time living in another country, so everything was awkward, such as talking in English and staying as a foreigner. However, it was a fun and informative moment as I got used to it and experienced many things and understood other countries. It was such a good moment that I want to go again if I have a chance.

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Hi Steve!  That sounds nice. I also went to Singapore when I was a kid. It was a fun experience too!   Thanks for sharing your experience. ^^

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

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I remember living in Singapore for 2 months because of language training. 
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I went with my juniors from the same school, and it was a program that offered language training and tourism at Singapore University with college students from other schools. 
>>I went with my juniors from the same school and it was a program that offered language training and tourism at Singapore University with college students from other schools. 

It was my first time living in another country, so everything was awkward, such as talking in English and staying as a foreigner. 
>>It was my first time living in another country so everything was awkward, such as talking in English and staying as a foreigner. 

However, it was a fun and informative moment as I got used to it and experienced many things and understood other countries. 
>>However, it was a fun and informative moment as I got used to it and i experienced many things and understood other countries. 

It was such a good moment that I want to go again if I have a chance.
>> CORRECT
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