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I strongly believe that waterproof book might make humans¡¯ lives a lot convenient. There's still many people who prefer paper books to e-books. Waterproof paper books will be used much more comfortably when people take a bath. I think the waterproof books will allow people to enjoy the feeling of paper books. Moreover, it will be easy to use because it does not get wet.

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Hi Emily!  That's actually a good idea!  Bookworms would be thankful if these are invented.   

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

-Teacher Elise 

I strongly believe that waterproof book might make humans¡¯ lives a lot convenient. 
>>I strongly believe that waterproof books might make humans¡¯ lives a lot convenient. 

There's still many people who prefer paper books to e-books. 
>>There's still many people who prefer paper books than e-books. 

Waterproof paper books will be used much more comfortably when people take a bath. 
>>CORRECT

I think the waterproof books will allow people to enjoy the feeling of paper books. 
>>CORRECT

Moreover, it will be easy to use because it does not get wet.
>>CORRECT
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