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I think the most interesting topic on our next book is \"Phoenix\"

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I look about our new book, and I saw for last, and I stopped at that page, because it was so awesome. I can't take out my eyes to that picture. Phoenix was so beautiful, I know they doesn't die however they go to fire. Also, I've heard that there was a Phoenix cloud in Beijing. That was aweosome. I put it on the file, so take a look. It's so beautiful!!

P.S. I'm so sorry I accidentally pressed the end button. It wasn't intentional. I'll be careful from now on!!

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Good evening Maria!

Absolutely no problem about the pressing of the button. It happens sometimes with me too! ^^

Well, the topic about the phoenix is very interesting, I agree with you. If you know the X-Men and Harry Potter, you would know about the phoenix and how it matters to the story because of its power.

Thank you for sending me the picture and writing about it as well.

See you again in class tomorrow!

-T. Donna =)

I look about our new book, and I saw for last, and I stopped at that page, because it was so awesome. 
>> I looked at our new book, saw the last page, and I stopped at that page because it was so awesome. 

I can't take out my eyes to that picture. Phoenix was so beautiful, I know they doesn't die however they go to fire. 
>> I can't take away my eyes on that picture. The phoenix was so beautiful. I know they don't die when they go to fire.

Also, I've heard that there was a Phoenix cloud in Beijing. That was aweosome. I put it on the file, so take a look. It's so beautiful!!
>>  Correct!
OR: awesome (SPELLING)

P.S. I'm so sorry I accidentally pressed the end button. It wasn't intentional. I'll be careful from now on!!
>> Correct!

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