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Where do you and tour friends usually go to?

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We go to a cafe that is quiet and serves good coffee.
We like to discuss in largest table of the cafe.
The owner of cafe knows what we like menus.
Wg get older we tent to like quiet suburb than city center.
Most of us don't like cafes in dowmtown areas.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you for today's homework!
Please keep up the good job!
Have a nice day and talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher Elly.
Where do you and tour friends usually go to?
We go to a cafe that is quiet and serves good coffee.
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or>>We hang out at a coffee shop which is quiet and where they serve good coffee.
We like to discuss in largest table of the cafe.
>>We like to discuss in the largest table of the cafe.
The owner of cafe knows what we like menus.
>>The owner of the cafe knows what we like from the menu.
Wg get older we tent to like quiet suburb than city center.
>>When we get older, we tend to like quiet suburbs than the city centers.
Most of us don't like cafes in dowmtown areas.
>>Most of us don't like cafes in the downtown areas.
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