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How do you overcome your \"stage fright\" (fear of speaking in front of people)?

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I think that stage fright could not be cured permanently. I believe that the people who have given a presentation so many times would be even afraid of doing something in front of auditors. But these people commonly recommend us to imagine as if you are on stage, and to carry out speech in front of a mirror or your friends or family. And then, they might say, we need to time to listen your record or feedback from people your around. Me personally, I do not consider this common way would be suit me, so that I am still finding the best solution for me.

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Hi Charles!

Happy Monday! Thank you so much for taking the time in answering the question. Here are some of the corrections, but I'm impressed of the way you expressed your ideas. You really did great! Keep it up! :)

~ T. Camille

I think that stage fright could not be cured permanently. 
>> CORRECT!

I believe that the people who have given a presentation so many times would be even afraid of doing something in front of auditors.
>> I believe that the people who have given a presentation so many times would be even afraid of doing something in front of the spectators.
OR >> I believe that the people who have given a presentation so many times would be even afraid of doing something in front of the audience.

But these people commonly recommend us to imagine as if you are on stage, and to carry out speech in front of a mirror or your friends or family.
>> The thing is, people commonly recommend us to imagine as if you are on stage, and carry out the speech in front of a mirror, your friends, or your family.

And then, they might say, we need to time to listen your record or feedback from people your around. 
>> They might say, we need to time to listen to your recording or feedback from people around you. 

Me personally, I do not consider this common way would be suit me, so that I am still finding the best solution for me.
>> Personally, I do not consider this common way would suit me, but I am still finding the best solution for me.
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