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The most memorable dream I¡¯ve had was when I met BTS in the dream. But it was not a kind of romantic dream. I¡¯m at the conpany and my coworkers were them. I also spoke in English with RM. We just discussed something and that was it. It¡¯s not a special dream but I just remember it the most.

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Hi Heidi! That sounded like a good dream. At least you got the chance to have a glimpse of experience being with them, right? 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

-Teacher Elise 

The most memorable dream I¡¯ve had was when I met BTS in the dream. 
>> CORRECT

But it was not a kind of romantic dream. 
>> Although it was not a romantic kind of dream. 

I¡¯m at the conpany and my coworkers were them. 
>> In the dream, I was at the company and they were my co-workers. 

I also spoke in English with RM.
>>CORRECT

 We just discussed something and that was it. 
>>CORRECT

It¡¯s not a special dream but I just remember it the most.
>>CORRECT
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