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What's the best part about living in Korea?
-> The best part about living in Korea is convenience store.
First, I can buy lots of useful things in convenience store.
Second, I like ramen very much, and convenience store has lots of ramen.
That's why the best part of living Korea is convenience store I think.

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Hi John! I love ramen too! I'm loving Korean ramen nowadays. Can you suggest good ramen to me?

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

-Teacher Elise 

The best part about living in Korea is convenience store.
>> The best part about living in Korea are the convenience stores. 

First, I can buy lots of useful things in convenience store.
>>CORRECT

Second, I like ramen very much, and convenience store has lots of ramen.
>> Second, I like ramen very much and convenience stores have lots of ramen. 

That's why the best part of living Korea is convenience store I think.
>>CORRECT
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