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I think the best part of living in korea is public transportations, especially Seoul. the capital of korea. There are a lot of public transportations in korea. such as Bus, train, subway.
we can go anywhere in korea with public transportation and the price of using public transportation is very cheap. also we have a transfer system. so if you pay just one time, you can use another bus or subway. but if you go far than standard distant, you can pay additional fee. but additional fee is not expensive.

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I think the best part of living in korea is public transportations, especially Seoul. the capital of korea. 
>>I think the best part of living in Korea are the  public transportations especially in Seoul, the capital of Korea. 


There are a lot of public transportations in korea. such as Bus, train, subway.
>> There are a lot of public transportations in Korea such as bus, train and subways. 

we can go anywhere in korea with public transportation and the price of using public transportation is very cheap. 
>> We can go anywhere in Korea with public transportations and the price of the fare of public transportations are very cheap. 

also we have a transfer system. so if you pay just one time, you can use another bus or subway. 
>>We have a transferring system so if you pay just one time, you can use a different bus or subway. 

but if you go far than standard distant, you can pay additional fee. but additional fee is not expensive.
>> Although if you go further than the standard distant, you need to pay for the additional fee. The additional fee though is not expensive. 
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