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What are you thoughts about having face to face classes even if there\'s a pandemic still?

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I think it's good to have face to face. In korea, The government started to give people vaccines before 2 days ago. They have a plan to give all of people in korea untill December,2021. So I think we can go anywhere without mask in 2022

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Hi Tobby! Wow that sounds great! I wish that our country has the same plan as well. 

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I think it's good to have face to face. 
>> I think it's good to have face to face classes already. 

In korea, The government started to give people vaccines before 2 days ago. 
>> In Korea, the government has already given vaccines to the people 2 days ago. 

They have a plan to give all of people in korea untill December,2021. 
>> They have a deadline that everyone in Korea should be vaccinated before December, 2021.

So I think we can go anywhere without mask in 2022
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