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Trust and distrust

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What happens when people don't trust each other?

People will live alone because of distrust. They can't work and hang out with other people. All of people say "I'm right and you're wrong". It's hard to communicate with others so many social matters will occur. I want people can trust each other. It's more stable than suspect other people when we live together.

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Hi, Libby!

Thank you for sending your answer to me.
I totally agree with you that it's better to build trust with each other rather than to have suspicions every now and then.
I guess, if there is trust and people honors them, we will have a peaceful world without worrying about lies or scams. ^^

~Teacher Gina

People will live alone because of distrust. 
>> CORRECT.
They can't work and hang out with other people. 
>> CORRECT.
All of people say "I'm right and you're wrong".
>> All people will say, "I'm right and you're wrong."
It's hard to communicate with others so many social matters will occur. 
>> CORRECT.
I want people can trust each other. 
>> I want people to be able to trust each other.
It's more stable than suspect other people when we live together.
>> It's more stable than suspecting other people when we live together.
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