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What can you do outside your house?

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I live in a house not an apartment.
I can do many things in my garden including exercising, drinking cup of coffees, playing with dogs, reading books, planting, and talking with my husband.
Before I go to the work every morning, I do streching in the yard for a short time with breathing fresh air and watching rising sun.
At this time I feel very grateful and peaceful around me.
Nowdays I don't go far for outdoor activities because I enjoy enough in the my garden.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you so much for the homework.
Have a nice day!
Teacher Elly.
What can you do outside your house?
I live in a house not an apartment.
>>I live in a house, not in an apartment.
I can do many things in my garden including exercising, drinking cup of coffees, playing with dogs, reading books, planting, and talking with my husband.
CORRECT!
or>>I do a lot of things in my garden such as, exercising, drinking coffee, playing with the dogs, reading books, planting, and talking with my husband.
Before I go to the work every morning, I do streching in the yard for a short time with breathing fresh air and watching rising sun.
Before I go to work every morning, I do some stretches in the yard for a short time while breathing some fresh air and at the same time, while watching the rising sun.
At this time I feel very grateful and peaceful around me.
>>At this time, I feel very grateful and there's peace around me.
Nowdays I don't go far for outdoor activities because I enjoy enough in the my garden.
>>Nowadays, I don't go far to do some outdoor activities because I enjoy working out in my garden.
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