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I think they are buying it to show other people and self satisfaction.
For example, the reason why person buy expensive luxury goods is to show other people and self satisfaction.
If they buy it, they would better what they can afford.
Also, they have to think about their needs and buy them not to show other people.

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Good afternoon Eden! Stay awake! Be active and keep going with your studies, okay? ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA 
I think they are buying it to show other people and self satisfaction.
>>> I think they are buying it to show other people and be self-satisfied.
For example, the reason why person buy expensive luxury goods is to show other people and self satisfaction.
>>> For example, the reason why person buy expensive luxury goods is to show other people and be self-satisfied.
If they buy it, they would better what they can afford.
>>> If they buy it, they should afford it.
Also, they have to think about their needs and buy them not to show other people.
>>> CORRECT
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