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회원님의 영작문

Q: How has the industry you work in been affected by the pandemic?

I think that manufacturing industries like petroleum or semiconductor don’t be affected by the pandemic. Because products which are produced by those industries are used many area. And petroleum industries using crude oil to make product are in a prosperous condition. Because of corona virus, delivery services have been booming and plastics have been used many times or areas.

And semiconductor industries didn’t be depressed. Because semiconductor are used many laptops, smartphone even electrical car. Actually iphone’s new series and galaxy S21 came out last year and electrical car market are developing.

As a result I think that two industries are more growing up in the future despite corona virus.
And I want to be a chemical engineer that can contribute to this growth.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sara! 
Yes, in the future you will be part of a good company and will contribute for the better future. 
Thank you! 

I think that manufacturing industries like petroleum or semiconductor don’t be affected by the pandemic. 
>>> I think that manufacturing industries like petroleum or semiconductor isn't affected by the pandemic. 
Because products which are produced by those industries are used many area. 
>>> This is because the products produced by those industries are used in many areas.
And petroleum industries using crude oil to make product are in a prosperous condition. 
>>> And the oil industry, which uses crude oil to make products, is thriving.
Because of corona virus, delivery services have been booming and plastics have been used many times or areas.
>>> Because of the coronavirus, delivery services have boomed and plastic has been used many times or in many areas.
And semiconductor industries didn’t be depressed. 
>>> And the semiconductor industry has not stagnated.
Because semiconductor are used many laptops, smartphone even electrical car. 
>>> Because semiconductors are used a lot, such as laptops, smartphones, and even electric cars.
Actually iphone’s new series and galaxy S21 came out last year and electrical car market are developing.
>>> In fact, last year, a new series of iPhones and the Galaxy S21 were released, and the electric car market is developing.
As a result I think that two industries are more growing up in the future despite corona virus.
>>> As a result, I think the two industries are growing more in the future despite the coronavirus.
And I want to be a chemical engineer that can contribute to this growth.
>>> And I want to be a chemical engineer who can contribute to this growth.

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