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Hello Claire!

Thanks again for the effort. See you in our next class! ^^

~~Teacher Kate


Many people¡¯s comfort food is usually fast food Such as pizza, hamburgers, and fried chicken.

>>CORRECT!

For Koreans, their usual comfort food is fried chickens and ramen. 

>>For Koreans, their usual comfort food are fried chicken and ramen. 

These comfort foods are connected to people¡¯s culture.

>>CORRECT!

One of the characteristic of Korean is a hasty personality.

>>One of the characteristics of Koreans is their hasty personality.

Because of this personality Koreans eat ramens and fried chickens to save as much time as they can. These comfort foods are easy to cook, saves time, and most importantly they are tasty.

>>Because of this personality, Koreans eat ramen and fried chicken to save as much time as they can. These comfort foods are easy to cook, saves time, and most importantly they are tasty.

I¡¯m also belong to Koreans. Therefore I enjoy ramen as tasty comfort food.

>>I¡¯m also a Korean. Therefore, I enjoy ramen as a tasty comfort food.

But I¡¯m not saying everyone¡¯s favorite comfort food belongs to their culture.

>>But I¡¯m not saying everyone¡¯s favorite comfort food come from their own culture.

People¡¯s tastes are all different.

>>CORRECT!

However, Korean comfort foods have various types.

>>CORRECT!

Because Korea has developed in delivery foods called ¡®People of delivery

This company leads the other delivery food companies to develop.

>>It's because Korea has developed delivery foods services called ¡®People of delivery"

This company leads the other delivery food companies to develop.

>>This is the leading company when it comes to food delivery services. 

There are other famous delivery food companies such as ¡®Yogiyo¡¯ (¿ä±â¿ä), ¡®Market Kurly¡¯ (¸¶ÄÏÄø®), and ¡®coupang eats¡¯ (ÄíÆÎÀÕÃ÷).

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In effect, half of Koreans eat delivery food every three meals.

>>In effect, half of Koreans eat delivery food for all three meals.

Food¡¯s main purpose is giving us fullness but also make us happy.¡¯ 
>>Food¡¯s main purpose is to make us feel full but also make us happy.¡¯ 
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