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HOMEWORK FOR 03.08

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Question : Why did you apply to our company?

Answer :
I started learning the golf after I quit my company.
And I'm interested in playing the golf and also golf company too.
I could see the bright future of golf industry.
Because golf is getting popular among the young people like 20s and 30s.
And also there are a lot of golf channel on youtube and getting popular too.
Your company has the best golf brand in the world.
I want to work with the best golf company so that's why I applyed to your company.


Job interview was really hard for me.
But I could learn a lot because of your kind and nice teaching.
Thank you :D
As like a Monday, I will answer the question first, and then I would like to you make a direction to me.
If I could apply the class and have 20 minutes class more, I think the time will be remained after talk Wednesday's class topic.
If that happens, can you give a another question to me like real job interview?
Have a good night and see you tomorrow.

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Hello, Jun! I admire your diligence to prepare for our class. Awesome! For your answer, I would like to suggest that you also make a research about why that golf company is famous and what do you expect  from them. How do you think the company can help you and how can you help them? One two sentences to answer these questions will do. I think your answer will become better if you add these. Thank you! See you! -Faith-
Question : Why did you apply to our company?
>> CORRECT
Answer : 
>> CORRECT
I started learning the golf after I quit my company.
>> I started learning golf after I quit my company.
And I'm interested in playing the golf and also golf company too.
>> Now,  I'm interested in playing golf and golf companies, too.
I could see the bright future of golf industry.
>> I could see the bright future of golf industries.
Because golf is getting popular among the young people like 20s and 30s.
>> Because, golf is getting popular among the young people who are in their 20s and 30s.
And also there are a lot of golf channel on youtube and getting popular too.
>> Also, there is a lot of golf channels on YouTube which are becoming famous nowadays.
Your company has the best golf brand in the world.
>> Above all,  your company is the best golf brand in the world.
I want to work with the best golf company so that's why I applyed to your company.
>> I want to work with the best golf company that's why I applied here.
Job interview was really hard for me.
>> The job interview practice was really hard for me.
But I could learn a lot because of your kind and nice teaching.
>> But, I could learn a lot because of your kind and nice teaching.
Thank you :D
>> CORRECT
As like a Monday, I will answer the question first, and then I would like to you make a direction to me.
>> Just like last Monday, I will answer the question first, and then I would like you to give me suggestions to improve it.
If I could apply the class and have 20 minutes class more, I think the time will be remained after talk Wednesday's class topic.
>> If I could apply for another 20-minute class, I think there will be remaining time after our Wednesday's class topic.
If that happens, can you give a another question to me like real job interview?
>> If that happens, can you give me another question to make it like a real job interview?
Have a good night and see you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT

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