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If something is limited, people would like to get it because it makes them special. I don't think all people have same mind, but most people want to brag their assets, possessions and goods to others. Some people purchase special edition goods such as shoes and bags and then they just keep it which isn't opened because it's worth will be better in the future. Limited productions will be valued more in the future because nobody can't buy it at that time so if someone keep it very well without any defect, it will be more valuable than the time it was sold. However, I think people who get a loan and buy expensive ones don't have normal thought. I have seen the comedian bought a luxury car and decided to stay in the car because he spent all the money for his car. I can't understand why people do these action. But there are a lot of people who want to buy luxury ones and are satisfied with their decisions.

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Good morning MR. HWANG! ^^ Success is no accident. It is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice and most of all, love of what you are doing or learning to do.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
If something is limited, people would like to get it because it makes them special. 
>>> CORRECT
I don't think all people have same mind, but most people want to brag their assets, possessions and goods to others. 
>>> I don't think all people have the same mind, but most people want to brag their assets, possessions and goods to others. 
Some people purchase special edition goods such as shoes and bags and then they just keep it which isn't opened because it's worth will be better in the future. 
>>> CORRECT
Limited productions will be valued more in the future because nobody can't buy it at that time so if someone keep it very well without any defect, it will be more valuable than the time it was sold. 
>>> CORRECT
However, I think people who get a loan and buy expensive ones don't have normal thought. 
>>> However, I think people who get a loan and buy expensive things don't have a normal thought. 
I have seen the comedian bought a luxury car and decided to stay in the car because he spent all the money for his car.
>>> I have seen a comedian bought a luxury car and decided to stay in the car because he spent all the money for his car.
 I can't understand why people do these actions.
>>> CORRECT
 But there are a lot of people who want to buy luxury ones and are satisfied with their decisions.
>>> CORRECT
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