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What was your greatest challenge in learning the English language?

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I think that practice is the best way to learning English language on every day.
Do not be shy when communicate with foreigner.
It is more important to have patience and fun in studying it.
Use a new word and sentence you have learned.

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Hi Sir Mandeep! Thank you for having the time to answer the question. Your really did great!
here are some of the corrections, but other than that, your sentences are really wonderful. Keep it up! ;)

~T. Camille

I think that practice is the best way to learning English language on every day.
>> I think Practicing everyday is the best way to learn the English language.

Do not be shy when communicate with foreigner.
>> Do not be shy when communicating with a foreigner.

It is more important to have patience and fun in studying it.
>> CORRECT!

Use a new word and sentence you have learned.
>> CORRECT!
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